10 Product Manager MBA Essay Clichés (and the Opener That Replaces Each)
The 10 Product Manager MBA essay cliché openers that make M7 applicants lose their uniqueness, and the alternative opening lines
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1st Example - Opening Line in MBA Essays
When my CFO asked me to defer the audit, I refused.
The next three weeks tested whether I would hold the line under sustained pressure. What I had not expected was the chain of consequences that followed
2nd Example - Opening Paragraph in MBA Essays
When my CFO asked me to defer the audit, I refused. He responded by putting additional responsibilities so that I fail in my audit. I didn't. He responded by reporting a weakness in my audit as a failure to comply with industry standards.
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When my CFO asked me to defer the audit, I refused. He responded by putting additional responsibilities so that I fail in my audit. I didn't. He responded by reporting a weakness in my audit as a failure to comply with industry standards.
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- 04Columbia Business School
- 05Chicago Booth
- 06MIT Sloan
- 07Kellogg
- 08London Business School
- 09INSEAD
- 10Berkeley Haas
- 11UVA Darden
- 12Dartmouth Tuck
- 13Yale SOM
- 14Michigan Ross
- 15Duke Fuqua
- 16NYU Stern
- 17Cornell Johnson
- 18Oxford Saïd
- 19Cambridge Judge
- 20HEC Paris
- 21IESE
- 22SDA Bocconi
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